Cleanup[]
Currently the article feels more like a repository of information than a cohesive article with a beginning, middle, and end. All the information here is great, it's just presented very haphazardly. -- yoda8myhead 15:33, October 7, 2009 (UTC)
- Better a native speaker to undertake the task. :) --Dmeta 10:44, October 8, 2009 (UTC)
Structure[]
This page includes also the definitions for "condottari", "rundottari", "regidottari", "duxotar", "durotas". I think it is better this way. Do you agree or you prefer to create pages for the other definitions ? If you agree I will turn all references of the other definitions to this page.--Dmeta 10:40, October 8, 2009 (UTC)
- Each of these definitions should appear in a clear definitions list and anchors should be placed on each one so that someone on another page can directly link to them here. We might even set up redirect pages for each definition to make direct linking easier. In any case, I agree that these definitions should appear on this page and not on pages of their own, as each definition would only warrant a few sentences at the most. -- yoda8myhead 13:10, October 8, 2009 (UTC)